Хотя я и не уверена, что мне это надо - но попробовать не мешает.
Никаких пояснений, о чем писать буду - зачем? Да и сама не знаю, вдобавок =)
Alanis, I'm here partly because of you =)
Well, in a way. (You inspired me, I suppose)
Do you remember what you told me about tankas?
So, check out this one.
Blackcap's singsonging
Dies in sourness of the air
And sleeping wind's breath
Into human whispers breakes...
The Time itself is burning down.
My first try. Feeling of the yesterday's evening. It took an awful amount of time - nearly half an hour. (But that's my first attempt at tankas in English, usually I do them in Russian)
Ah, I suppose I'll use this place as a drafts' collection, then.